This discussion is wonderfully clear, but it is written a bit like a children's story; e.g, "... very, very old..." I think the acceptance of this as a scholarly presentation could be achieved without losing the clarity with some minor editing.
This discussion is wonderfully clear, but it is written a bit like a children's story; e.g, "... very, very old..." I think the acceptance of this as a scholarly presentation could be achieved without losing the clarity with some minor editing.